I think one of the reasons the Drake Chronicles continues to be such fun to write is that it started as a whim. I wanted a change of pace and took a gamble on chapter one...and then each successive chapter, and by the time I'd finished the first book, the whole convoluted story of a series had unspooled in my head. It's wildly self-indulgent; draws on classic fantasy tropes and story structures, but with prose, plot twists, and character analysis that asks those tropes and structures to go the extra mile into "damn, she went there" territory. I think it has a bit of a fanfic feel to it, and for me, that's never an insult; fic takes the bones of a story and layers on the satisfaction that so often is sacrificed in the name of all that has come before it. I'm having fun with it, the little series that could.
Here's a look at the opening of book five, Fortunes of War, which picks up directly where DOTD left off.
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Most nights,
Oliver was so exhausted after a day of politicking, organizing, strategizing,
and going for at least a quick ride on Percy that he barely had the energy to
return Erik’s kisses, much less dream once he fell asleep. When he did dream,
it was a vision of dragon-sight, sharing the view with Percy from up in the
clouds. Sometimes it was through Percy’s eyes, memories or drake imaginings.
Other times, like tonight, he was in his own skin, helmeted and armored,
astride Percy as they plunged through clouds that shredded around them like
damp parchment.
The strangest
part was that he knew he was dreaming. The drake dreams were nothing like
normal ones, in which he was generally stuck somewhere cold, dark, and
unpleasant, surrounded by strangers or monsters, petrified of some formless
malevolence that left him startling awake in a cold sweat. Nightmares, truly,
and the most frequent of nocturnal wanderings, save the rare, pleasant
occurrence he dreamed of strong arms and a deep voice. There’d been a dream
lover before a real life one came along, and though he’d not been a Northman
with long, braided hair and a mantle of wolf fur, he’d been as stalwart and
gruff and big-handed as Erik.
Funny how
dreams turned out for the best, sometimes.
Funny, too,
that he could feel the sting of cold wind against his face, and feel the
working of Percy’s great wings in the muscles along his back.
He could hear
something, too, beyond the whistle of air past his ears. A kind of shrieking,
distant, but growing clearer. A bird? He faced forward and scanned the
cloudscape that lay ahead of them, searching for the source of the noise. It
sounded again, louder, shriller than it had seemed at first. Perhaps a hawk,
then. A messenger falcon?
The
stomach-grabbing thought that it might be someone who wished him ill struck the
same moment a cloud just ahead tattered to bits. Through it came a sleek,
pointed head with backward curving horns, and a long neck, a pair of flexing
wings, white and bat-shaped. A figure lay low along its withers, gripping tight
to the spines along the drake’s neck without aid of saddle or bridle.
Oliver
recognized the drake and human pair the same moment Percy did, and had his
knowledge reinforced by a sharp surge of joy through the bond he shared with
his dragon.
Percy bugled
a greeting.
Oliver cried,
“Náli! Valgrind!”
Valgrind
screamed a hello, undulating through the air toward them as he accelerated –
and nearly unseated a cursing, wildly-clutching Náli. “Stop! Stop, you – oh,
fuck you, you fucking lizard – stop!”
Oliver
laughed as Valgrind swung wide behind them and then swept up alongside. But his
laughter died as Valgrind settled into a steadier pace and Oliver got a look at
Náli’s face. He was nearly as white as his drake, his eyes huge, his expression
terror-stricken. It was not, Oliver could tell right away, fear of flying that
gripped him, but something much more urgent.
Oliver
pressed his knee into Percy’s side so that his wings lifted high and he was
able to glide in closer. Father greeted son with a nuzzle of noses.
Oliver fixed
his attention on Náli. “What is it? What’s wrong? How,” he said, brows flying
up when the weight of what was happening struck, “are you here in my dream
right now?”
“It’s not a
dream!” Náli was panting, shouting to be heard over the roar of the wind in
their ears. “We’re in the Between!” When Oliver started ask why, he said, “It’s
another plane! Where the dead pass through!”
“That’s…alarming!”
Percy gave a trill
of warning, and then angled his head down into a graceful dive. Valgrind must
have done the same, if Náli’s curse was any indication.
That was too short. I already love it. Thank you so much for these stories.
ReplyDeleteI want more, I want so much more...this series is fantastic. Can't wait for more xx
ReplyDeleteI'm curious if there's a set number of books in this series. Or a projected wrap-up of the main conflict in these books (the war)? I've read the first three and am trying to handle my expectations lol. It's such a good series!
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