Okay, so this is a short story - in theory - that I was going to enter into a contest. But Markus getting sick derailed a number of plans, and I haven't had the chance - since it's a historical piece - to do the proper backing-up-my instincts research and editing. So I can't submit it - but I can share it with you! What I intended to be a standalone short ended up being the prologue of a historical romance novel. I know it's an old trope, woefully unoriginal, but I just really loved writing it, and hope to turn it into a full book at some point in the future. It was one of those projects that helped me to see how much my prose has grown in the past decade, and that's thrilling.
It's about 3.5k words, set in London. I reuse some names from some of my other work (Charlie is one of my favorite names of all time, y'all), and I'll readily admit that it's editing neither for factual content, nor for typos. But otherwise, please enjoy.
Corona
Civica
“Rex is
stopping by tonight,” Tommy said over breakfast. “Or, supposed to be.” And Danny
left the last of his toast uneaten, belly clenching with excitement for the
first time in quite a long time.
Up until
recently, Danny had found little cause for excitement. Most of his energy had
gone toward trying to keep from winding up dead in a gutter. He’d known this
was the greatest risk of his short life nearly since birth; he recalled,
perhaps with preternatural clarity, a moment when Bobby Nesbit from the
downstairs flat had held him out the window and threatened to drop him to his
death on the pavement below, saved at the last second by a furious, cursing
Mrs. Nesbit. To no one’s surprise, once Mum died, he’d refused the Nesbits’
offer of a bed – such as it was – and struck out on his own, twelve-years-old,
wearing all his clothes on his person, with only some stale biscuits and a few
family heirlooms in his pockets.
He’d
pawned Grandfather’s watch, but kept the locket, smoothing a thumb across the
cool tin of its face on cold nights bundled into doorways. The reaper loomed
around corners. But just as he’d grown hopeless, he’d met Devin, and in a
moment of unbelievable good fortune, found himself employed.
“Alright,
Danny my boy,” Devin said, pressing a stamp into the hot wax, sealing the
envelope. He blew on it a moment, letting it dry, and fixed Danny with a look
across the desk. “You’re to take this to White’s – you know where that is? Good
lad. And give it to His Lordship Charles Prescott, Earl of Northam. Straight
away.”
Danny
took the envelope carefully; his fingers were still sticky from the jam tarts
Ellen had put out for tea. “Yes, sir.”
The seal
caught the light: a tiny oak wreath pressed into the red wax.
“Straight
away, you understand,” Devin prompted, and Danny slid out of his chair and
shrugged into his coat. It was a new coat, thick warm wool, a gift from the
mysterious master of the house. “Wait for Lord Northam’s reply,” Devin
continued, shuffling amongst his papers, “and bring it back to me. Understood?”
“Yes,
sir.”
But
Devin paused a moment, hands splayed across the desk, and studied him. A small,
bookish man in his middle years, the light from the candles glinting off his
spectacles, his most remarkable feature would have been his untidy gray hair,
thin and flyaway, if not for the scar that streaked down the side of his face. Red,
its edges puckered from a poor stitch job, it had been the first thing Danny
noticed about him the day they met; long since used to ignoring things better
left alone, he’d forced his eyes away from it, and made a point to never let
his gaze wander over its wicked lines.
It was a
reminder, though. Devin might dress well, and speak softly if anxiously; but
there was a dark spot on his past. Same as every member of the Order.
“Anything
else, sir?” Danny asked. His heart pounded, a mix of eagerness and nerves. He’d
been running letters for two weeks now, but Devin had taken him on with the
firm insistence that this was only a trial period, pending the approval of the
Order’s leader, Rex. In those two weeks, he hadn’t glimpsed the man yet.
Devin
looked at him a moment longer, then nodded to himself and turned back to his
paperwork. “No, that’ll be all. Be sure to wait for his reply.”
“Yes,
sir.” He escaped out into the vestibule, ducked under Peter’s arm – “Where are
you off to at this late hour, eh?” – and into the street.
The
Order, of which Danny hoped to someday become a member, occupied a handsome
red-brick house in Grosvenor Square; the sort of house where Danny’s mother had
worked as a governess before having him. Not ostentatious inside, but outfitted
with thick carpets, comfortable furniture, and plenty of wood for the fires.
Ellen cooked enough to feed an army – and very nearly did, what with all the
comings and goings of the Order’s various members. Rex had bought the house,
Peter had confided; Rex had bought the rugs, and chairs, and tables, and the
plates they ate from and the beds they slept in. He’d said so in a hushed
voice, gaze bright with admiration.
At this
point, Danny had begun concocting wild, imaginary backstories for the
illustrious Rex. He was a pirate captain, with gold hoops in his ears and a
tri-corner hat; maybe a parrot. He was a foreign prince trying to undermine the
British Empire. He was an honorable outlaw thief, a new Robin Hood, robbing the
rich and giving to the poor. Each fantasy more outlandish and splendid than the
last, until he vibrated with excitement every time the man’s name crossed
someone’s lips. He wanted violently to be allowed into the Order…but he wanted
to meet Rex even more.
It was a
warm spring night out on the street, the faint perfume of cherry blossoms
sweetening the usual city stinks. Hackneys and private carriages clattered
along the cobbles, and Danny passed smartly dressed groups on their way to
dinner and to shows. He walked briskly, murmuring an “excuse me” as he went,
trying not to trod on the long tail of a lady’s gown. He earned a few looks,
but Devin – with Rex’s money – had outfitted him well enough that he didn’t
look like a grubby street urchin anymore.
White’s
appeared ahead, its windows lit, their buttery light washing over the pale
façade so that it glowed. A curtain twitched in the bow window, and Danny
hastened his step. The sooner he delivered his message to the earl, the sooner
he could get back to the house and, hopefully, finally catch a glimpse of the
illusive Rex.
A
doorman loomed in the entryway, in black coat and spotless cravat; he looked
all the way down the generous slope of his nose rather than tip his chin down
to glance at Danny.
Danny
presented his envelope. “I’ve a message for the Earl of Northam, sir. I’m to
wait for his reply.”
The
doorman made him stand a long moment; on principle, Danny thought. Then took
the envelope with a sigh. “Wait here.” He stepped just inside to hand the note
off to a footman, and then resumed his stance, stern gaze fixed on the street.
Danny
shoved his hands in his trouser pockets and settled in to wait.
A moment
later, though, the door opened, and the footman caught the doorman’s attention.
A short, sharp exchange, and then the doorman turned to Danny, frowning. “His
lordship requests your presence at his gaming table.” He looked terribly
displeased by the idea, but opened the door, and gave an impatient wave.
Danny
realized his mouth had fallen open, snapped it shut, and hurried to follow the
liveried footman into the smoky din of the famous gentleman’s club.
The
front hall, wider than any flat he’d ever lived in, with its polished floors
and soaring ceiling, its paneled walls and its flickering sconces, threatened
to grind him to a stunned, gaping halt. But the footman never slowed, inured to
all the wonder around him, and Danny hastened after him, careful not to run,
dragging his cap off his head and clasping it tight between suddenly-clammy
palms. He wasn’t fit to breathe the air in this place, much less walk through
it.
The
footman led him up the grand, carpeted main staircase, down a hall that offered
glimpses of a dining room fit for a king – gleaming chandeliers, white china,
low murmur of masculine voices – and finally to the card room.
Tall
bookcases lined each wall, framing the draperied windows. Gleaming sideboards
boasted an array of decanters, heavy cut crystal full of wine, and whiskey, and
brandy. Green baize tables took up much of the floor space, and around them,
smoking, drinking, goading one another, cards fanned in manicured fingers, sat
England’s noblest and most eligible.
The
footman halted, and Danny barely avoided colliding with him. “He’s at the table
by the window,” the footman said with a subtle tilt of his head. “The gentleman
in black.” Then he left the room.
For a
moment, feet rooted to the Persian carpet, Danny panicked. Was he to go over
and introduce himself? Isn’t that what footmen did? Announced visitors and
messengers? Should he wait by the door and hope that Northam found him? No, no,
that was terribly rude, but he had no idea
what to do. And “gentleman in black?” Half the men in the room wore black
jackets – or had them draped over the backs of their chairs.
He took
a few gasping breaths, crushing his hat in his hands…and then forced himself to
still. His pulse hammered high in his throat, but he closed his mouth, and took
slow breaths through his nose. Scanned the table, searching.
The
gentleman in black. Oh.
Six men
played cards, ranging in age from a portly, white-haired chap about to fall
asleep into his wineglass, the faces of his cards plainly visible, to a wispy
thing who couldn’t be older than eighteen.
Among
them, unmistakable, was a gentleman wearing all
black. Black neckcloth, black shirt, black waistcoat, and perfectly tailored
black coat, nipped in at his wasp waist. His hair was black too, and severely
pomaded, so that the angles of his brows, and his prominent nose drew the eye.
He sat perfectly upright, cards held close and tight on the tabletop, mouth
turned down at the corners. Pale. Severe. Possibly even hostile. In a room full
of easy, laughing men at their leisure, the man who must be the Earl of Northam
looked to be having a terrible time.
And he’d
requested Danny come to his table. Wonderful.
Danny
crept along, feet silent on the carpet, and skirted the table until he stood as
near the man’s elbow as he dared.
One of
the other gentlemen at the table noticed Danny first, a sandy-haired, smiling
man in a green waistcoat, his shirtsleeves rolled to the elbow. He had a
friendly, sun-bronzed face, and he said, “Northam, there’s a boy for you,”
after a brief glance in Danny’s direction.
Northam
held still a moment – he didn’t even blink – and then he lifted his head, chin
jutting forward at an imperious angle, and slowly turned to regard Danny, his
gaze downcast, resting somewhere along Danny’s shins. A gaze that lifted, inch
by inch, until he finally looked at Danny’s face from beneath half-lowered
lids. Haughty. Harsh.
“Yes,”
he drawled. Deep voice, emotionless. “I see that.”
He
finally made eye contact, fleeting – but long enough for Danny to see the size
of the man’s pupils; wide and black with only a thin ring of blue around them.
And his gaze: not just haughty, but glazed-over. Unfocused.
Something
was very, very wrong.
“My
lord?” Danny said, stepping closer, forgetting his nerves a moment. “Are you
well?”
“Quite,”
Northam said, and turned back to his cards. “A moment, if you please. And then
you may accompany me.”
“Yes, my
lord.” He folded his hands together behind his back and waited.
And watched.
The earl
deliberated a long moment over his cards. The sandy-haired gentleman said, “Do
you fold, Charlie?” with a smirk.
The old
man gave a great snort, slopped wine onto the tablecloth, and came awake with a
start.
The earl
didn’t appear to move. He didn’t even blink. But Danny noticed, finally, that
his cards shivered, just once; that the earl’s hands trembled, faintly.
“What’s
happening?” the older gentleman asked, casting a bleary look around the table.
“I’m
folding,” Northam said, with severity, and laid his cards down slowly. Stood –
also slowly, hands pressed to the baize tabletop. “Boy,” he said, and Danny
moved to his side straight away. “We are leaving.”
“Yes, my
lord,” Danny said, heart pounding, and was surprised by the half-dead weight of
the earl’s hand landing on his shoulder.
“Too
much whiskey again, Charles?” the sandy-haired man asked with a laugh.
“No,”
the earl said, drawing himself upright. He held his head high, his entire body
tense, as he maneuvered out of his chair and gained his feet. “I’m simply weary
of tonight’s company.”
The
other man laughed, and a few of the others echoed it.
Northam
plucked his black gloves from the edge of the table, and gave Danny a little
push. “Good evening, gentlemen,” he said, grave and formal, and Danny started
away from the table, leading him, wildly mindful of the grip on his shoulder.
They
proceeded out of the card room that way, into the hall, the earl walking stiff
and upright behind him. When they gained the hall, Danny half-turned.
“Keep
going,” Northam said, a note of strain in his voice.
But
Danny had seen, and his step faltered.
The earl
had only one leg, the left merely a bit of polished dark wood below the knee,
trousers tucked and pinned around the top carefully. Like Captain Ahab! Danny thought, wildly.
“Move,
boy,” Northam said, roughly, and a glance at his face proved him pale and
sweating, mouth set in a grim line.
Danny
moved.
It
seemed to take forever to leave: an arduous trip down the carpeted stairs, and
then enduring the attentions of footmen who rushed to offer the earl his
greatcoat, helping it onto him. Except for that moment, putting his hands into
the sleeves with great care, Northam kept a tight grip on Danny’s shoulder.
“A
pleasure having you this evening, my lord,” the doorman said on their way out.
“Yes,
thank you,” Northam offered, and then it was out into the cool spring night,
with the scent of horse manure and cherry blossoms and coal smoke.
Northam
walked with a surprising smoothness for a man with a wooden leg, upright and
straight-backed, gaze fixed ahead. But three blocks down from White’s, he let
out a sound like a gasp, and his hand tightened on Danny’s shoulder. “Good
God,” he said, voice flat. “I’m going to be sick.”
His hand
peeled away, he turned, and, gloved palm braced on the brick façade of the
building, vomited onto the pavement.
The Earl
of Northam was spectacularly drunk.
Danny
sighed.
When
Northam finally subsided, he turned, awkwardly, and braced his back against the
wall, limp, pale-faced, and shaking. “Christ,” he murmured, and pushed an
escaped lock of black hair off his forehead. When he lifted his face, his eyes
seemed to glow in the flare of the streetlamp on the curb, his cheekbones
throwing long shadows down to his chin. Eyes still dilated, watery from the
retching. “What’s your name?”
“Danny,
my lord.”
“Devin
sent you?”
“Yes, my
lord.”
“A word
of advice, Danny: never accept a drink from someone you don’t trust.” Then he
turned and fell to another bout of heaves, this one fruitless.
Danny
hadn’t a clue how to proceed. He shivered, and swallowed down his own gorge as
the earl continued to retch. “My lord?” he ventured when the man finally stopped.
Northam
rested his forehead against the bricks, and panted, open-mouthed. “Yes, Danny?”
Voice hoarse from being sick.
“Shall –
shall I take you somewhere, sir?”
Northam
didn’t answer for a long moment, then finally straightened, steadying himself
with one hand on the wall. Even sick, and one-legged, he lifted his head with a
remarkable amount of poise. To have been this drunk, this ill, Danny thought,
and to have seemed so buttoned up back in the club, took an admirable kind of
fortitude. “Yes,” he said, rasping, “to the Corona House, if you will.”
Danny jolted
like a spooked horse. The Corona House! The Order! “But…my lord,” he started,
voice wavering. “That’s–”
“Just
take me there.” Not unkindly, but with great authority.
And
Danny was only a messenger. “Yes, my lord.” He wanted to be sick himself, now.
He
approached the earl slowly, and the man held himself quite still, until, when
only a few inches away, Northam lunged forward and took him by the shoulder.
Overcompensated, and nearly pulled them both down. “Shit. Forgive me.” Northam
took a shuddering breath. “Damn.”
“My
lord?”
“Lead
on, please.”
He did.
And they made it three paces…before Northam lost his grip, said “damn” again,
and fell face-first to the pavement.
“My
lord?”
A weak
hand lifted, and waved, while the face stayed pressed to the ground. “Fine. I’m
fine.” The hand fell. “Or. Rather. Not very fine.” The hand lifted again, this
time in supplication.
Danny
grabbed it, braced himself, and pulled.
Northam
staggered upright – and fell again. On top of Danny.
Northam
was a slender man, but well-muscled, Danny realized, when he was crushed
beneath him; the earl was heavier than he looked.
“My
lord?” Danny squeaked.
“Damn,”
the earl said again, with great feeling, and rolled gracelessly over onto his
back.
Danny
scrambled upright, face hot with embarrassment. No matter that the man was
blind drunk – he’d just allowed an earl to fall. In public. A disabled earl at
that. Doubtless Devin would pass word of this along to Rex, and then there’d be
no hope of joining the Order.
“My
lord.” His voice trembled. “Do you think you can stand?”
“Yes,”
Northam said, his eyes closed. He swallowed like he might be sick again, skin
waxy in the moonlight. “Though I supposed you’d better help me.”
Had he
been observing the spectacle, rather than participating in it, Danny would have
found the whole thing hilarious. As it was, fear dogged him the whole, arduous
way back to the Corona House.
Thank God, he thought, when he
tested the door handle and found it unlocked.
Northam
let himself be helped across the threshold, then stepped away from Danny and
lurched over toward the rosewood table below the mirror, bracing both hands on
its edge, hanging his head over the big china vase of cut tulips there.
“Danny,” he said, emotionless, “be a dear and take the flowers out, will you.”
Danny
rushed to comply; the stems dripped water onto the checkered tile floors.
Northam
stood a moment, trembling, real and false legs both threatening to give out,
with his head bent over the mouth of the vase, shuddering and gulping.
Devin
stepped out of his study and found them like that. “Good God!” he shouted,
rushing forward. “What’s happened to him?” He directed the question to Danny,
but Northam lifted a staying hand, and then his head.
With
difficulty, he stood upright and turned to face the steward. His face was
blanched white now, eyes still hugely dilated; hair clung to his sweaty temples
and cheeks.
“Are you
drunk?” Devin asked.
“Dosed,”
Northam countered. “I was able to take a purgative. Hence…” He gestured to
himself.
Devin
stared at him, grow brows up to his hairline. “Dosed with what?”
“Opium.
By Lord Ashby, I suspect.”
“Opi…Christ,
Rex. We’ve talked of this!”
Rex. Rex.
Danny’s
hands went slack; the tulips fell to the floor.
Both men
looked at him; Northam with the exhaustion of illness, Devin with misplaced
anger.
“You,”
Danny said, forgetting his manners. “You said – you called him Rex.”
“Because
that’s his name,” Devin snapped. He’d never looked like this before, furious,
and harried, his eyes wild with worry. Worry for the earl – for Rex.
“But,”
Danny said stupidly. “Hes…my lord, you’re…the Earl of Northam. Charles
Prescott. You…”
The earl
sighed, and though glazed, and feverish, his gaze was not unkind as it fixed
unsteadily on Danny. “Charles Reginald Prescott. Rex is my nickname.”
“Then
you’re…you’re…”
“Of course
he is,” Devin said. He moved to the earl’s side and put a shoulder beneath his
arm, on the side with the missing leg. “Did you think a private citizen paid
for all this? For the clothes you’re wearing? Here now, Rex. Let’s get you to
bed.”
Danny
stood, dumbfounded, as they began a slow walk toward the staircase.
The
mysterious Rex who was their leader, the master and financier of Corona House,
and of the Order of the Corona Civica,
was an earl. Charles Prescott, Earl of Northam.
Who had
a wooden leg.
Who’d
been doped with opium tonight.
He
couldn’t think.
Northam’s
– Rex’s – voice floated back to him, though, as the two men started laboriously
up the stairs. “Oh, go easy on her, Dev.” Slurred with the drug, but still
regal.
They
paused a moment. “On him,” Devin said.
“No. Her. Your messenger boy’s a girl, can’t
you tell?”
“What –
how–?” Devin spluttered.
Danny –
who’d been born Daphne, and not Daniel, and who’d sheared off all her copper
locks to spare herself the troubles of growing up a homeless young woman in
London – scrambled to take the tulips to the kitchen, face aflame, panic
streaking through her like lightning. But on her way, she heard, from the
stairs:
“You’ll
have to hire her now.” Northam. Amused. “I’d say the Order just admitted its
first female.”
Now I’m hooked. Are we getting more of the story? Please? Love your writing!
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