The apple was small and withered, but when she bit
into it, a trickle of juice ran down her chin and the green skin snapped
beneath her teeth. She found a black piece of rot and dug it out with dirty,
ragged fingernails, and kept eating. She’d forgotten the names she’d always
wanted to give to her children, the color of her favorite dress, the things her
mother had told her about proper manners. All that existed was food, and
shelter, listening and living. All she knew was survival.
I love it! It sounds like the beginnings of a great mystery. My imagination went wild with just this one paragraph, wondering who she is and what led her down this path.
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